The passage "How and why is music a good tool for health?" by Elizabeth Scott, has shown that music has depth effect on our body and mind in several ways. It can be used to help cancer patients, children with attention problems, and others by music therapy. Different beats of music would bring people different effects on their mind. For instance, faster beats bring people more sensitive. Slower beats bring a quite, and relaxable effects on people's mind. Furthermore, music therapy can help prevent the stress disease by the changes of music which brings slower breathing, slower heart rate, and relaxation effects. I agree with the idea that music therapy is helpful for the person who feels stress.
Music therapy can be a good treatment by inducing people in possitive way of thinking which medicines can't. My cousin who felt stressful during her pregnancy, it's really dangerous and unhealthy for a motherhood and her unborn baby. However, her doctor advised her with the music therapy which is to listen the soft and slower beats music in her house all the time. Naturally, she felt better, relax, and no longer depress by doing with music therapy. Finally, she was successful give a birth with a healthy baby.
Many children have difficult problem by fallen sleep. They might cry at night until their parents sing to them the softly and slowly songs to inducing them fall sleep, or tell a story in peaceful way. For example, I heard my cousin always sing the softly song when her baby was crying at night. After a while, the baby finally stop crying and fallen sleep.
As we can see, the music is a good tool for health, isn't it? People usually use music therapy for relaxation and calm down from stress.
Moko, a generally good structure but the third paragraph is underdeveloped--you need more than a couple of lines to build a claim. Remember what we said about creating a scene
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